FuNDaMeLoN's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pointless Guitar Loop]

Pointless

but still fun, somehow.
Sounds like my little brother sat on my keyboard :D

halfangelfreak responds:

I lol'd.

[juicy flavor (demo)]

Love it

I didn't even realize it was a loop until about five times playing through. Great job on it, but i would think it would take more than five hours for a song to be finished. Then again, this is just a loop, and a good one at that.
Would go well in a puzzle game somewhere. :D

killerhoofd responds:

Thanks man!

first time that i got reviews without criticism!

[TUndra Fox - Glitch]

I enjoyed it

But it sounded like it could use some more polish. Bass was a little over the limit,
and i could not understand the beginning. Did you just cut in from the middle from the existing song?
Othar than that it was cool and there was some inadvertent head-bobbing going on also.
If you want real good glitches, go for the dBlue "Glitch" effect (google it)
Upload the full version soon please!

tundrafox1 responds:

I cut it from the middle of the song
I don't know how to do bass really
I am teaching myself the program without tutorials or anything

I'm raw talent, self taught =3

I will not upload the full version. I've had people steal my music before so I will not upload the full version lol.

I have dblue glitch

[Drum N Trance]

Great

Awesome, I enjoyed a ton!
Epic tune, and drums never fail to impress throughout.
Darkcore, I would say. :D
(BTW -- DDR: Dance Dance Revolution)

WAR-BASTARD responds:

Thanks for the review :). Ah that's what DDR is eh? Lol I've got to say I find that pretty funny someone wanting to dance to my stuff :D

[Cloud City (Night)]

Very nice

I think this goes more to the video game/ drum and bass genre.
Very ambient, especially at the beginning.
Lots of 8-bit, around 3:00 ish.
Keep it up man!

Also check out:
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/list en/200563

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

Yeah, i just tossed it in Miscellaneous. That works : P
Lots of bits, yes : D
Had fun working on it. Probably not my best work - but it was something different. Want to make a "Cloud City (Day)" sometime soon.

Checkin' the link!

[Miles Of Snow]

Pure awesomeness!

The soundscapes keep gettin better and better.
I can just listen all day long, it forms such a clear picture in my head. (not that miles and miles of snow would be much of a picture...)
Awesome trans at 2:54
Gratz on Weekly Top 5! :D
Keep up the glitch, it's awesome! (Did i say that already? >,<)

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

MELLLLOOONNN!!!

Haha. Love'n the listening by you. Haha, miles of snow is not too hard to picture. Its the big clumps of snow falling from the sky - the deep wind kicking them up and not letting them hit the ground, the grey dark 6:00am morning sky that takes some skills to see and feel. Far off city lamps filtering through the snow haze letting you know there's civilization out there.

Ohhh, i'll be keeping them glitches coming for a long time!

[The Great Accident]

Drums, drums, and DRUMS!

Seriously. Pure ownage, but this time it's all bout the drums, man.
Love the trumpet part, but it's more of a tune integrated with the rhythm than a melody on its own, kinda used as a part of the percussion, if you know what I mean. (the poor trumpet :o)
It's been a while since you updated a song, and those two loops were great, but not enough >,<
What composer program do you use?

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

Fundaaaameelllooon : D

Thanks man. Yeaaah, gotta love them drums, aye! I've been thinking about redoing the drums more when the simple trumpet melody comes in. Dunno though. I feel like its all pretty solid. I feel you though. The simple notes in the trumpet with the delay and tremolo that sort of follows along with the drums : D - too much melody would get in the way - so i figured something simple would be effective with the right effects on it. Yeah, i havent had internet for a couple of weeks. Been having some troubles with it as of late - but its all fixed up now - so i got a chance to submit the two tunes i was working on in the mean time.

I use FL Studio for all my stuff. You thinking about trying it out??

[(NUB)The Wizard's Finale]

Another story T.T

Falling.
As sky becomes ground,
and ground becomes darkness.
There is a light.
A light at the end of a tunnel,
a faint candle in a dark room.
You reach toward it,
Just out of reach.
Walking... Running...
Running towards the flame.
As you reach it, it is suddenly extinguished.
No... Noo... NOOOO!!!!!
You scream,
alone in the darkness.
You feel a chill,
not a feeling of cold,
but a sense of evil.
You see a shadow.
Out of the darkness?
No... It can't be!
The black wizard.
Again. Damn.
"I thought we left him in that forest..."
what forest?
Nothing matters now.
Only you and him,
forever foes.
Light against dark.
You stare at him.
He stares back.
A cold, evil stare.
The chills again.
As reason fades,
and awareness to your surroundings becomes ever more distant,
One thing comes to mind.
Vengeance.
You leap for him,
pass through him.
What the hell?
This is gona be a lot harder, you think.
As the fire springs from your fingers, and he leaps nimbly out of the way,
you are amazed, if not shocked, at his abilities.
There is but one option.
But, no, that will destroy you and the fabric of reality.
What reality?
What you?
You does not exist anymore.
Just the spell.
As you are torn apart,
the last thing you see is him dissipating into a fine mist.
Screaming in terror, agony, and anger.
You smile, out of happiness and satisfaction,
the last thing you remember.
All becomes black, again.
But this time you see another light.
You reach toward it, but where is your arm?
Where is your body?
You are now an empty soul,
wandering about.
But this place is better...
It's different.
Let's go.

LOLZ GREAT SONG ROFL
That was probably my longest poem ever written for a review >,<
plz pm me the real one so i know why everyone else is making fun of me :D
Nice crazy drums, but to be honest with you, i think AloysiusRexford owns on that one.
Gratz on #1!!!

nubbinownz responds:

thank you for this wonderful review <3
and as far as the drums go :P
I completely respect and enjoy aloysiusRexford's music :) 2 very different styles though my friend :D

[Bob-The Chase]

Gotcha

Good song, but the whole tune is RIPPED OFF
yeah you heard me. Ever heard Paragonx9's Chaoz Impact??
Aha! Some advice: Try to mke some songs that are your own tunes, not kinda modified ones that other people made...

Bob-Music responds:

Yeah I've heard it, I can see what you mean but I assure you this isn't a copy, she's just done a song that sounds similar but has done it better

[WASP-12b]

Whoa

Love the changes in this one, lol.
Nice techno and synth at the beginning, and it gets pretty intense at 2:30 or so.
Great glitch as always, but what happened to the score? 2.54 o_0
Ballin' at 3:50 :DDDDDD

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

Thanks Man, glad you like - yeah, i dont think people can handle the face melting breaks, haha. It's a pretty oddly constructed track - i will admitt - i'm actually still tinkering with it - taking things out, adding things, etc, etc. I cant find a balance i like, yet. : (

Glad you dig though!